Updated Trexi Header Design
I've taken the feedback I've been give on my original Trexi design and made some changes seen below.
If anyone would like to give me any more feedback on my updated design then that would be great.
I'm still not sure about the logo where it is at present. I might change it back and put it somewhere else. I'm still not sure about the PI logo either, I think perhaps I'm trying too hard to use the font I've used but again feedback on any of these things would be appreciated.
7 comments:
Try and make the ticker tape straight instead of at an awkward angle. Maybe have it running across the top or the bottom of the banner? When I mentioned using the pi logo I meant tucking it in a corner somwhere.
It looks a little lost bunged in the centre like that. It's nice to see you've used an outline of a trexi, but it looks really jaggy. Just the compression?
(meant to add this to above post)
Also, consider which should have the more focus. Trexi is the product, therefore the Trexi logo should be bigger than the emphasis given to Play Imaginative.
Cheers again Craig.
I think the ticker tape straight across the top would be most effective as (if you've seen my website) I have ticker tape running right along the bottom.
I think the trexi is jaggy because of the way I imported it as it looks similar in the PSD file looking at it again.
I also see your point about making the trexi logo have more emphasis than the PI logo, looking at it again it is very small (especially against the PI logo)
You do make good comment about the Play Imaginitive Logo it does look a bit placed for placing it sake. Trexi should have more emphasis like Craig said as it is the product.
The tape it self looks a bit off in comparison with the Trexi but only slightly. As in the angles are different for both objects. That could sort the problem out.
Is the rest of the website grey as well?
As for the jaggyness on the Trexi it looks like it could pass for a chalky outline, which I'm sure is accidental but it works well I think.
Think about what craig said about the tape running across the bottom, some how if you can make the tape run over the PI like it's an object, it would add a great effect to it.
I really like your idea for this. What I would do is make your title fill the space that its in. I think Craig mentioned it looked lost and this is probabley to do with the amount of negative space.
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